Is this sentence grammatically correct?

A Slovak student, determined to master digital painting, shares his art journey.

Or is there any more creative way to say it?

Comments

  • It's impossible to comment on the sentence without knowing the context. Are there other sentences before or after it? Is there a picture with it?

    Without this information, I don't know whether the PRESENT SIMPLE shares is appropriate.

    There may also be a problem with the word journey. And possibly with the word art.

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